When I get their response, I'll rewrite their answer a bit and ask for their approval of the rewrite. Other times I'll write a draft testimonial based on the verbal praise they've already given me. I always make it clear in such cases that I want it to only say things they agree with and believe enthusiastically.
Here's a letter I sent recently. I was responding to some very strong praise I'd gotten from my client in email. Note that I simply ask for a testimonial, and offer an outline -- actually, two outlines -- for structuring the response. (This is enormously helpful to the person responding and increases both the likelihood of a positive answer and improves the quality of their response.)
Since you're being so sweet, let me ask you for a testimonial. The structure of a testimonial is often this (adapted from Kent Blumberg):That's all it took. You can do it too. And you should.
Who are you (i.e. in what way can the reader identify with you)?
Here's a different outline (from Veronika Noize):
- Why did you decide to use us?
- What were your expectations, and how well did we meet them?
- What benefits did you get from working with us? (Please be as specific as you can.)
- Who should consider using us?
Thank you kindly.
First, why did you decide that the time was right to work with me? What situation or event prompted you to seek my help? Second, what specifically did we do together that resolved or improved that situation? And finally, what was the end result or outcome of our work together? How did you know that our work was successful?
-Tom
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